Persuasive Piece

This statement is highly disagreeable, for the fact that six graders are NOT immature, and definitely NOT too immature to handle having a laptop. 70% of the students take an instrument, which needs great care, and it is worth as much as a laptop. If we can care and handle for a instrument, why not a computer.

We are also not immature after taking years of educational knowledge. This proves that we ate smart enough to know that people CAN see what we are doing. With that knowledge, we don’t do immature things in our computers. Besides, we don’t toss our computers and play catch.

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