April 21, 2015
Learning: Something that I learned from my essay was a unpacking sentience. I think that it was very helpful and that the unpacking was good for a essay. A unpacking sentence is when in a sentence you use something like “this proves that…” or “this shows that…” and stuff like that. I think the unpacking sentences were very useful for stating something and it was interesting to learn. You should use a unpacking sentence in every sentence to elaborate the sentence and show your opinion. I recommend that you should use this in a essay because it will help.
Challenge: One thing that I thought was a challenge was the boxes and bullets. The boxes and bullets is a draft that you have to write your introduction and then you write your Main idea 1 2 and 3 and then you write 3 supporting details for each main idea. After you are done you have to write a conclusion. Also after you write your introduction you have to write a thesis and a thesis is when you are stating your opinion.
Celebration: One thing that I did well was learning all the facts of the article that we had to study. When the class had to study for homework I would always do it and I would enjoy it. It helped me learn new things and cool things that I had no idea about chocolate milk. I was fascinated by the booklet it was very interesting for me and I liked working with my partner and helighting stuff and reading with my partner
I liked making this essay it was fun and interesting I learned a lot of things and it the things I learned were so cool. I suggest that you do an essay about chocolate milk and learn/study about chocolate milK.